Critical commentary

Planning:

Our group:
- feedback for our group: put referencing on the page rather than at the end

Other group:

- once again the referencing

Communication:

Gothic architecture group (anthony, lauren etc...) :
- good depth in understanding what communication is.
Video: shows different methods of communication well.

Suprematist sculpture (anthony and marina):
-presentation has good detail.
-video was fun and informative.

Bus stop of the future (anthony darren martha and daniel):
-thorough research on communication relates well to their project
-video showed the stages of their project.

Intellectual property:

 Vedran& Alyssa

- too much text in their slides.. some of which they say isnt related.
- not facing audience while presenting
- texts too small to read


dorothys group gothic architecture:
-seemed well researched.
- good relation to our degree and field of work